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ponderthepoetorrsx
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0 posted 2013-09-28 09:38 PM



Colour blue,
Colour black,


Final hue,
Imperishable night,

Color blue
Color black.

Final due,
Black abyss.

Colour blue

Tinted red

Painted purple

Color black

Grayish morn

Orange tinge

Insanity blue

Insanity black

Always and forever

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2013-09-29 08:14 AM


I followed you through the palette of colors and yes it speaks to me of our fate in this world of duality.

Well done.

Margherita

ponderthepoetorrsx
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2 posted 2013-10-01 12:58 PM


Thank you
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