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Open Poetry #48

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Dakota
Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 125
New York

0 posted 2013-09-27 04:48 AM

Banished to this icy realm.
Devoid of life’s sustenance.
Struggle to draw a breath.
In frozen tendrils grip.

If but word from you.
The sun may shine again.
From this frozen icy tomb.
A heart may beat once more.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-27 07:44 AM

The heart, as we all know, is fragile, and when left to contemplate of things gone wrong it can indeed feel like a blast from winters worst has come to live there. I like this Dakota.

~*~ I don't have to eat sarcasm to recognize the flavor. ~*~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2013-09-27 09:25 AM

The warmth of a kind or loving word can do wonders Dakota, very much enjoyed this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2013-09-27 02:52 PM

Burrr, Love it, Dakota.
Ida

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

4 posted 2013-09-27 05:11 PM

Dakota - It takes only one ray of Love to deice a frozen heart and get it beating again. Fine writing Dakota. I much enjoyed this. Namyh

Dakota
Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 125
New York

5 posted 2013-09-27 11:04 PM

Thank you all for your kind words!

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