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Open Poetry #48

I dreamt

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2013-09-25 06:36 PM

I dreamt I penned a poem,
With words beyond compare,
Of hope and dreams and boundless love,
Of beauty O' so rare.

Each word a note, each line a song,
Each verse a symphony,
Sung by muses from on high,
In perfect harmony.

Then I woke in dawn's first light,
I rose to meet new day,
While still in bed, my fairest rose,
In slumber yet did lay.

I gazed upon her tranquil being,
Upon quiescent face,
Realized that I was gazing,
Upon angelic grace.

Of the poem I had dreamt,
My dream had come to life,
Laying there upon our bed,
In fairest rose, my wife.

Hope Ms. Santos doesn't take offense. Haven't written much lately, but do come in to read my favorite authors. Read her wonderful dream poem and was inspired by her thoughts.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-25 07:22 PM

I doubt she would take offense at being culpable in knowing she jump-started this lovely poetry, Tim.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2013-09-25 10:34 PM

Beautiful, also i liked the structure

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-09-26 06:45 AM

what a beautiful loving poem to write about ones wife...fortunate woman she is!

Lori

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2013-09-28 03:30 AM

This is beautiful Tim!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-10-08 10:16 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

6 posted 2013-10-10 05:45 PM

Lovely poem!

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