Open Poetry #48 |
Haiku |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
One little ripple Serenaded by moonbeams The whole sea dances Beginning and end God has flawlessly designed Not to understand A pure bead of dew Rolling silently away A soft petal weeps Clustered black pillars limbs naked with silent bark Lush green whispers wait Elizabeth Santos |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Superb, Liz (as always)! I love and feel the heart of each of these exquisite haiku's. Haiku's simply don't get better than this! Read them 3 times and will be reading them more. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, Elizabeth. You have surely mastered the art of the Haiku. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
A lovely chain of pieces! Much enjoyed! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Regal spells throughout |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
REALLY fine! |
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