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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2013-11-14 07:57 PM




One little ripple
Serenaded by moonbeams
The whole sea dances

Beginning and end
God has flawlessly designed
Not to understand

A pure bead of dew
Rolling silently away
A soft petal weeps

Clustered black pillars
limbs naked with silent bark
Lush green whispers wait

Elizabeth Santos

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OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2013-11-15 06:22 AM


Superb, Liz (as always)!  I love and feel the heart of each of these exquisite haiku's.  Haiku's simply don't get better than this!  Read them 3 times and will be reading them more.  

Owl

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2013-11-17 07:03 PM


Beautiful, Elizabeth. You have surely mastered the art of the Haiku.
                                 Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-11-19 09:24 PM


enjoyed...James
Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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Russia
4 posted 2013-11-20 01:32 PM


A lovely chain of pieces!
Much enjoyed!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2013-11-21 12:50 PM


Regal spells throughout
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2013-11-21 02:49 PM


REALLY fine!
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