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Open Poetry #48

..shame

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2013-09-25 02:39 AM

he lives for those
twinkles in her eyes
but when she cries,
he is ashamed to consider
her tears the most beautiful
~~
..(C)2008/2013 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram; reaching
into the poet's mind
~~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-09-25 06:05 AM

So deeply poignant and wonderfully sensitive, dear Spiros.

Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2013-09-25 06:17 AM

quiver-beautiful, Spiros . . . as is your sweet shame which is, of course, not shameful at all, as I am sure "she" will tell you . . .

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2013-09-25 09:22 AM

.thanks Margherita and Diana..'tis a poem
[a tanka] from 2008, I believe-- drawing from
even an older memory..one of those poems
that come out of you in a minute..

..best wishes..spiros
~~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2013-09-28 03:36 AM

A joy to read, Spiros.
Ida

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2013-09-28 02:40 PM

..thanks much, Ida..I'm pleased
you read this one..

..s.z.
~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2013-10-08 10:18 PM

enjoyed...James

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

7 posted 2013-10-09 12:51 PM

..hello James..>>thank you..spiros

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