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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2013-09-25 02:39 AM



he lives for those
twinkles in her eyes
but when she cries,
he is ashamed to consider
her tears the most beautiful
~~
..(C)2008/2013 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram; reaching
into the poet's mind
~~

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2013-09-25 06:05 AM


So deeply poignant and wonderfully sensitive, dear Spiros.

Margherita

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-09-25 06:17 AM


quiver-beautiful, Spiros . . . as is your sweet shame which is, of course, not shameful at all, as I am sure "she" will tell you . . .

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
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3 posted 2013-09-25 09:22 AM


.thanks Margherita and Diana..'tis a poem
[a tanka] from 2008, I believe-- drawing from
even an older memory..one of those poems
that come out of you in a minute..

..best wishes..spiros
~~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2013-09-28 03:36 AM


A joy to read, Spiros.
                    Ida

Spiros Zafiris
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5 posted 2013-09-28 02:40 PM


..thanks much, Ida..I'm pleased
you read this one..

..s.z.
~~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2013-10-08 10:18 PM


enjoyed...James
Spiros Zafiris
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7 posted 2013-10-09 12:51 PM


..hello James..>>thank you..spiros
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