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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-09-24 02:18 PM



You are my quiet contemplation
my safe solitude
on the shores of the ocean
that is your devotion
You are my peace of mind
where love unwinds
what tension binds
Lips I feel upon my neck
are my beloved opiate
Arms enfold me
with words that hold me
Your reach that touches
my soul with rushes
Contentment and yearning
brings my heart to sing
your song so passionately
that your love is all I see


  

LGRĀ©2/17/12

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-09-24 03:31 PM


That is a good love, I'm happy you have it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-09-24 07:08 PM


me too, thanks Jerry.


~L

Margherita
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3 posted 2013-09-25 06:34 AM


You say it so beautifully, dear Lori. Quiet contemplation is a good place to be and to become aware of the real treasures we possess, which can't be bought by money.


Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2013-09-25 02:50 PM


Margherita~
You bless me with your kind words. Hugs!

Lori

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2013-09-25 07:13 PM


sounds heavenly, may your embrace this love always
ponderthepoetorrsx
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6 posted 2013-09-25 10:38 PM


Nostalgia, assails me upon reading this poem, which of course is good , keep it up
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