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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2013-09-23 10:25 PM

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Somewhere between the streets
A deep voice cracks violently

The trombone
And an old man
Sing the blues

Perhaps its the humid air
That lets the jazz stick around
Until the sun begins to rise

You said you where glad
I saw your home
Before Katrina

I just recall the warmth
A love deeply in-ground
Into everyone there

And a love for music
So rare now...
I was jealous

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-24 07:37 AM

Somewhere within ourselves we have passions which defy conventional wisdom. Enjoyed this.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-09-24 02:21 PM

I really like this, it takes me to a place I have never been before.

~L

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-09-24 06:56 PM

I like the whole feel to this, very contemporary in the poetic jive

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-09-25 06:46 AM

A beautiful memory, drenched in unforgettable tunes.

Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-10-02 09:38 PM

a pleasure to read...James

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