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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-09-23 08:03 PM

She raised her right hand towards the flags of the weathers heart
With her undergarment onto the wood based floor
She thought about the way her eyes
lured her small breast of toes towards the mahagoney.

Her inner temple
the way her lips could convene
with the shadow of a small face
that was once all too familiar

The ghosts red tape
the one where her eyes
gave way to a light
under the soft bare of her voices cackle

Those tears
streaming with her hearts
steadying for the vines grip

Woven yarn
her dress sound with the closets quiet stage
staring down the hallway
half laced, in the opposite direction of her quiet, wood floor.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-23 09:08 PM

I'm reading The Silver Chalice," and this poem could have been taken out of the book. It is the culture I see also that seems to come from the book

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2013-09-24 06:58 PM

real sensuous I liked much

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-09-26 04:17 PM

Jerry-

I hope the book is a good read, then! Appreciate the comment (I'll have to check out the book). Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-09-26 04:17 PM

Emma-

Appreciate the compliment; happy you enjoyed. Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-10-02 09:40 PM

Nice to read...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2013-10-05 02:08 PM

James-

Happy you enjoyed, my friend. Hope you're well

Cheers

Tomer

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2013-10-05 08:39 PM

your work is always interesting to read

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

8 posted 2013-10-07 01:36 PM

Emma,

Thanks for the read. I guess they are, but sometimes my thoughts tend to run deeper than my hearts desires. Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

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