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Open Poetry #48

What She Gets From Me

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-09-22 07:57 AM

Her physical resides with you,
In your house you retain her . . .
She's not all yours; if you but knew,
She shares her love with me, Sir.

She's a wild child though not a child,
It's your own fault to me she ran.
You can't keep her all to yourself . . .
You cannot give her what I can.

©July 6, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2013-09-22 08:34 AM

sometimes the physical barrier erases when true love flourishes
well put poem

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-09-22 08:44 AM

Good Morning Emma, appreciate your input . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-09-22 09:24 AM

We have read over the years the love you have given her and hear of the love she gives you. This latest reveal into your relationship comes as no surprise and is, in my opinion, your boldest statement yet.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-09-22 09:49 AM

I thank you Lori. Yes, it is bold, I suppose, but it comes straight from the heart. Appreciate you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

5 posted 2013-09-22 09:03 PM

nice to know that there are men who appreciate the woman they love nicely put

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-09-23 09:13 AM

Thanks Eric.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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