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Can just three words |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England 
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Can just three words Can just three words express my love Just habit without thought Describe your soul, or beating heart Love's rules cannot be taught I, the first, of those three words Self centred I hope not For no-one knows, my I, like me Or things I know I'm not Love the second, well that you know Like fate it called that day But what is love, please tell me true This thing that grows each day And then there's You, the final word Your eyes that laugh and cry Your smile that lights my life each day Until the day I die But those three words are not enough I Love You, should be four So add a word, and then you see I am in Love, that's sure. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very, very beautiful. Both the 3 words and the 4 words, I know she feels, despite the circumstances. Your love and devotion to her, especially under the circumstances, warms my heart and increases my faith in humanity. I know it is very sad for you, but I am sure that it warms your heart to know that she is loved and cared for so much. Thank you, on her behalf, because I know she would be saying so if only she could. Owl |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wonderful words! enjoyed Kat >^..^< |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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