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Open Poetry #48

From Here to There

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-09-18 06:10 AM

from here to there
I've memorized how your
eyes change
when you're upset
they get this sorta glazed-over stare
and . . . later
when we're together they soften
a little

From here to there
I've recognized your likes and dislikes
how your mood changes
when things are not going right
but pick back up
when you write a poem

From here to there
I've memorized
all the little things that make you
.
.
.
you

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-09-18 06:22 AM

This is so sweet Jerry! I'm sure she loved it. Hugs to you both

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-09-18 07:51 AM

Thank you Lori. I think she did.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

3 posted 2013-09-18 12:46 PM

I know this feeling quite well and your words were able to create a warmness in my soul always enjoy your creations so real and meaningful

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-09-18 12:56 PM

You are very kind, PC, thank you very much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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