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mvvenkataraman
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since 2011-11-12
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0 posted 2013-09-17 12:51 PM


Make an attempt to realize your dream
Result of sincere efforts is supreme

We cannot sit idly and aim very high
That type of aim, the Lord will deny

We must make a reasonable contribution
If we expect not any kind of confusion

Success normally comes not via luck
Without digging, gold is not struck

Taking efforts and then winning is joy
As our skill and dexterity, we employ

Sweat is a holy water that creates peace
So, never disregard it at anytime please

What God denies, surely efforts will fetch
All loopholes in life, efforts can stitch

Losing is neither an insult nor a shame
In this way only must be played life-game

We must learn a lesson from every event
And understand that nothing is permanent

Today's loss may in fact be a great gain
That may arise in future removing pain

Today's success may turn out to be a loss
In future due to fate's inscrutable laws

Do what you can showing the best sincerity
Let your mind hold tightly holy equanimity

One may criticize and another may praise
Former via shock, latter giving a surprise

Life must be lived well with expectation
Time must be spent with true exhilaration

Pleasure to taste, pain to just digest
We will be damn happy, in case we adjust

Let our mind be trained to be positive
Proper training, we only must now give

We must stand like a rock during troubles
As an existing problem, fear easily doubles

Prayer is invented only to stop worries
Due to prayer, hope and faith increase

As God alone is the ultimate authority
We must inform Him ever our difficulty

He will take steps to cure and heal
For us, He is always there to feel


mvvenkataraman


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Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
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1 posted 2013-09-17 06:10 PM


mvvenkataraman - Faith, Courage and Conviction etc. are already inside all of us. Some allow their demons and Fears to override and deactivate these more noble qualities and thus fake us into thinking that the noble ones only exist in someone else other than ourselves. The best opportunity we have to strengthen is when the demons raise their ugly heads and we override them instead. It’s the stuff Heroes and Sheroes are made of as your wonderful words hit home for all of us to embrace. Most enjoyed. Namyh
poetically ghetto
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2 posted 2013-09-17 07:21 PM


good strong rhythm and wonderous theme which we can all relate to enjoyed
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-09-17 10:24 PM


fine writing...James
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