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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-09-12 06:53 AM

he thought hard about her
every day
today he caught a city bus
paid the driver
told him he wanted
two transfers
before realizing
he was by himself

©September 11, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-09-12 07:10 AM

WoW! with a twist and I love it!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-09-12 07:18 AM

Thanks Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2013-09-12 08:22 AM

They must have spent a lot of time together. This is sweet, even with its sadness. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-09-12 08:31 AM

Thanks Trina, I appreciate your thoughts.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-09-12 08:49 AM

that feeling of being swept away by love can make us lose our selves like that.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-09-12 08:51 AM

Thank you, Emma. It's always nice to see you here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2013-09-21 06:31 PM

Fine wriitng...I've been taking the bus to work lately...on the days when its not crowded its like heaven...James

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-09-21 08:32 PM

Thanks, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2013-09-21 10:17 PM

Thank you, Jams

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

10 posted 2013-09-22 02:22 AM

been there for sure

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

11 posted 2013-09-22 02:39 AM

The mind plays tricks or maybe not in this land of perceived duality.

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