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Open Poetry #48

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-02-28 11:46 AM

I had a room with a view
right to my very soul
The wind blew in
billowing my sheers
Where windows weren’t
mirrors were
And I could see
somewhere
exotic
erotic
in me
I could fly
my entendre kite
in a dark blue sky
waiting for the lightning
to strike
me full of light

LGR©2/28/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-02-28 11:48 AM

And full of light you seem to be these days, Lori. Good poetry.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-02-28 12:39 PM

Thank you my friend

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-02-29 01:35 AM

Always exciting to read you, Lori.
Very nice poetry!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-02-29 11:24 AM

Thank you for supporting my work JL

Lori

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

5 posted 2012-02-29 03:08 PM

great poetry writing........wow

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