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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-09-08 07:22 AM



You're sad, what to do?
When you're left with emptiness,
Smile fraudulent smiles.

©April 26, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2013-09-08 09:13 AM


guilty on all counts. You put it right out there when you tell the little secrets of human nature... Yet another good write my friend.

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-09-08 09:44 AM


Yep, I think we all are guilty on all accounts, Lori. Appreciate your input.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08
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3 posted 2013-09-08 10:20 AM


Hey! I've been doing that for a very LONG time! Are you following me?

Good work AND observation.

JLHunter

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-09-08 10:23 AM


Hello JL, and thank you for your comments. Ahhh . . . these valleys so low and the peaks so high in life . . . we become confused and weary.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

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