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Open Poetry #48

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-08-26 08:15 PM

If I wished for passion
from the one I love
and to whom I belong
and that wish was met
with indifference
would that wish be wrong

If I wished for passion
from someone of love
but whom I do not belong
and that wish was met
with exuberance
would that wish be wrong

Dare I never dream of it
For it would be too taboo
and never to come true
Are those days
of reciprocation dust
Is love supposed to grow old
and lose it's lust

LGR(C)8/26/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-08-26 08:25 PM

I think love isn't supposed to lose its lust, but unfortunately, it does many times. The first two verses I would have to say no to both instances. Sometimes that is just the way that it is.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-08-26 08:52 PM

Thanks Jerry for your very kind and understanding words

Lori

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