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Rama
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since 2013-08-16
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0 posted 2013-08-17 12:10 PM


That girl is so aloof, I tell you.

She complains about the lack of stars in the sky when they hide behind her sparkling eyes.

She wants to adorn herself in the finest gold she can't afford, but I know full well that her heart is made of it.

She creates problems of her own doing, like a spider stuck in its own web, but forgiveness awaits her when they see the childish innocence in her silly expressions.

She shares with me the impossibilities of her dreams, but I know they'll come true because the entire world smiles when she smiles.

That girl is so aloof, I tell you.

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2013-08-17 10:40 AM


Sounds like a real sweetheart, however aloof she may be.

Welcome to the blue sea, Rama.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2013-08-17 05:44 PM


*Magic is the word that comes to mind.  You're lucky to know such a girl.  Enjoyed.

Michael

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-08-21 10:39 PM


enjoyed...James
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-08-23 05:31 PM


Hah! Aloof has been given new meaning . . . Very good, Rama

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

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