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Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 2013-08-08 09:19 AM

tell me
that you love me from afar
tell me what my heart would say
tell me what we are today

so tell me

tell me
that you love me from afar
you say my words you understand
you say you are my biggest fan

in a room down the hall
photos paper the walls
there's mp3s and dvds
an awkward shrine just for me

tell me
that you love me from afar
tell me you could heal my heart
tell me i'm your rising star

so tell me

tell me
that you love me from afar
tell me what my heart would say
tell me what we are today

tell me
tell me that you love me

Alicat
08/08/13

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-08-08 01:44 PM

Such a heartfelt motion and emotion springing from your innermost longing.

Well done. Could be a song too.

Margherita

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2013-08-08 05:06 PM

You're certainly a pipStar - You and your words are a wonderful sight... Happy Day..

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2013-08-09 09:56 AM

I do love this heart spill....and the very breath and depth of the matter

Great to read you here again.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-08-09 09:57 AM

I like this for way more reasons than my lazy fingers are willing to type this morning. Topic is original, form (like your choice of repititon) My favorite line:
"an awkward shrine just for me"

Enjoyed!
Lori

swampguy
Member

since 2013-08-04

Posts 83

5 posted 2013-08-09 01:24 PM

Okay, this one touches home base as far as I'm concerned. Those afar relationships are fraught, at times, with this kind of musing.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

6 posted 2013-08-09 08:07 PM

Thank you all for the responses. This one was in my head after a rather strange dream, one which, for me, has no basis in reality.

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