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All Things |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Every single soul I have ever known Every creature born, every lily grown Every bird that flies undisturbed and free Every star that shines in the galaxy Everything we crave but have never seen All that ever was or has never been All beyond the reach of our outstretched hand All the knowledge yet undisclosed by man All magnificence in the earth and sky All creative thought, every lullaby Every miracle on the brink of birth Every soul to step foot upon the earth He has walked your pathway a thousand times He is in the ink of my rhythmic rhyme He has been aware from the very start Every prayer that waits in your lonely heart |
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swampguy Member
since 2013-08-04
Posts 83 |
A comforting and deeply moving poem, Elizabeth. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
every thing is said before all the words are spoken he a another worth unbroken. nicely penned. RS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Elizabeth! So beautiful! Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent as always, Elizabeth. Ida |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Beautiful as always, Liz.  |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
ES - You have wonderfully captured some of the essences of this life for all of us to appreciate if we haven't already. There is a rhythmic lilt to your words which shows the craft of creativity that only the poet can bring. Very nice work Elizabeth. Much enjoyed. Namyh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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