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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-08-02 04:50 PM


THE NOWS OF NEVERMORE
2 August 2013

There amongst the silence of the stones,
whisper-echoes glaze her eyes
with velvet-touch remember-thens
of sun-delight and shimmer-moons
and a name that flings the stars into the sky
into a million patterns, wild and wide
like a forest of murmured autumn words
in untamed foliage array
caressed by late afternoon sun
in softened gold
and shadowed gentle greys
that breathe their elegance
in humble grace
enhanced by white night-flowers
that share their cool fragrance
in secret troth
with those who seek
the humbler treasures.

How can this ever and never be
in madcap, windswept days and nights
of never more?

Owl

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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
1 posted 2013-08-02 06:12 PM


the natural world has no comparison, then again we are that natural world as well,though sometimes we need reminders as in your words of wonder. I loved the foliage running wild without being pruned, nature at its most glorious without man's interruption, though my neighbors would have a hissy it if I just let all my arbor go wild here. :
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-08-02 06:28 PM


Thank you, and smiles, EmmaRose, for your compassionate and understanding response.  I am sorry to hear that your neighbours would not understand, nor appreciate an untamed garden.  

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
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3 posted 2013-08-02 09:30 PM


grand imagery ... VERY fine writing indeed!
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2013-08-03 12:12 PM


Thank you very much, Bruce.  Smiles.

Owl

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