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Open Poetry #48

Our World

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-31 06:50 AM

first we are born
into a world we do not know
a society full of problems
that we spend almost all of our lives
attempting to resolve
eh . . .
it isn't until we reach our
golden years
do we find the answers to our problems
so don't you know
we thoughtlessly apply our knowledge
onto the generation following us
this generation
has been born into a world
they do not know
its a society full of problems
and they spend almost all of their lives
attempting to resolve them

©July 12, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-07-31 06:56 AM

...and the beat goes on...
Good morning to you JP2!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-31 07:01 AM

Yes, it surely does, Lori.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-07-31 07:07 AM

etc, etc, etc.......
the circle of life, and we chase our own tails till we get it
LIFE is beautiful, if you let it be
what you do here is by choice, make it a good one

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-31 07:10 AM

Thanks Emma, thank you so much for your feedback.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2013-07-31 08:57 AM

yes, there seems to be a negative Karmic cyclicity to it all! ... well 'penned' indeed.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-07-31 08:59 AM

Thanks Bruce, you nailed it wit your "Karmic cyclicity to it all." Thanks.

~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~

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