Open Poetry #48 |
Wordy Nerdy |
Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
Wordy Nerdy I’ve got all these words a’swirlin’ All around in my crazy mind And, I keep on a’ searching Trying to the right kind. If I really wrote my feelings ‘twould make somebody sad Because most of my thoughts Are, rally kinda bad! I rarely do some editing And my spelling checker’s broke So, you’ll just have to read thise words My brokn mind has spoke. Prob’bly nobody wants to here But, I don’’t relly care Cause all I can do is the thoughts That are here or were there. I’ve been one place for a ear And coan’t count a ingle froend And I just seem to be waiting Until the waiting ends. It does’nt relly bother me Kinda used to where I am No matter howI try and try Just end up right here ahain. And, if some can’t figure it out There’s nothing much to say Except its mush easier TOO writ it all this way‼ Del "Abe" Jones Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984 [This message has been edited by Abe (02-27-2012 10:49 AM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Never saw so many typos in your poetry, Abe. Makes me wonder if they were part of the plan. I like this poem - hate to think that you are that alone, but maybe you are and maybe you aren't. I try not to put people's personal lives in their poetry (if that makes sense). I read your poems - and as I said yesterday, don't always agree. However, I do appreciate that you have a point of view. A |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I just seem to be waiting Until the waiting ends. Many of us know that feeling... including me. I'm so glad we have words... they seem to make the wait easier. |
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