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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-24 05:28 AM

I only wanted to be heard
so I went looking
for someone to hear
that's where I found you

beautiful destiny or
good luck charm
haven't figured that out yet
we're playing for time

but there you were
where I'd never looked before
waving at me sans wave
me just trying to be heard

was it the devil
in that angel's kiss
the day we finally met
connected and smiled

you with your dark
me with some light after
decades of my own dark
clicked and the race was on

remains to be seen
what karma has in store
whatever it may be
I'm in it til the end

©January 9, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-24-2012 07:13 AM).]

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2012-01-24 07:15 AM

Sweet and full of hope & possibility.

Lovely~
Write-on!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-24 07:38 AM

Ah, Baby Girl, you do know how to make a guy smile with hope, and I thank you for that.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2012-01-24 10:12 AM

Sometimes someone looks in the caverns to find peace, and instead they find diamonds. Isn't that a beautiful discovery? You wear love well, Jerry.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-24 10:13 AM

Yes, Nicole, it is beautiful, and thank you so much.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2012-01-24 10:15 AM

Good for you, Jerry. Glad to see you so happy.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-24 10:16 AM

Thanks Owl, I am that. Happy I mean.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2012-01-24 11:02 AM

You are not getting senile (your poem OLD)you are just crazy in love and I'll bet it is taking years off you and you look better than ever.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-01-24 11:12 AM

Don't know about the senile part, Lori, but I am definitely crazy in love. Look better? Eh, don't know. I feel younger even as I grow older. Thank you for your kind remarks.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2012-01-24 01:09 PM

Karma looks good on you!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-01-24 01:11 PM

Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate it . . . Love that karma, that good karma.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

11 posted 2012-01-24 03:10 PM

may the light shine ob both of you, friend. A beautiful discovery, indeed. Show her off.

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-01-24 03:17 PM

Thanks, Michael, appreciate the good thoughts.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

13 posted 2012-01-24 05:24 PM

All is said above, what can I add...
Except maybe...
Your heart is showing and
it looks good in what you found, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

[This message has been edited by JL (01-25-2012 12:49 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

14 posted 2012-01-24 05:30 PM

Thanks, JL, yep, I'll admit that my heart is showing . . .

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

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