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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-25 07:20 AM

I'm not wealthy except for her,
I know her and that makes her real.
She's a radiant, loving heart,
So in my view that's a good deal.

Her view of the world, heaven sent,
The love she has she gives away;
She does for others, her heart pure,
This poem I give to her this day.

©July 24, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-07-25 07:28 AM

Too bad your lady love isn't a poet, I'm sure we would all want to hear her love talk about you!
This is very sweet and shows admirable qualities about her.

Lori

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-07-25 07:30 AM

How very beautiful, dear Jerry!

I see your two hearts are playing very enthralling tunes together. You inspire each other in a way we all long for.

Very much enjoyed these pure loving emotions you expressed here.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-07-25 07:31 AM

Thank you Lori, I agree with you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-25 07:31 AM

Margherita, I appreciate you constantly commenting on my poetry. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

5 posted 2013-07-25 09:29 AM

It's a really nice dedication, Jerry )

Thank you for sharing!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-07-25 10:07 AM

Thank you you so much, Gale.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2013-07-25 10:35 PM

You are a man of his words....and its always something special.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-07-26 06:45 AM

You started my day off right, Lori, thank you for that.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2013-07-26 08:36 AM

well said !

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-07-26 08:49 AM

Thanks, Bruce . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2013-07-29 10:45 PM

Very nice...James

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2013-07-30 07:06 AM

Thanks James.

~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~

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