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Gale
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0 posted 2013-07-16 09:12 PM




Saying
Never is a dread word
Couldn’t reach the day I sought,
Even if I played your game
Will you utter my name?


Listen
Never is a sweet sound
You release me from all bounds
Promise nothing, show me no way
I feel going astray


Sweet or bitter
I have no taste
For the time I can not waste
Disappear in your keen plot
Two divided by naught

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17/07/2013
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-07-16 09:57 PM


quote:
Two divided by naught


That says it all . . .
~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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2 posted 2013-07-17 07:30 AM


You're right, that's the clue  

Thank you for reading, Jerry! )

Margherita
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3 posted 2013-07-17 01:14 PM


quote:
You release me from all bounds



Sometimes it feels like freedom and in other moments it feels like loss.

You write intensely and beautifully, Galina.

Margherita

Gale
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4 posted 2013-07-17 01:48 PM


Thank you, Margherita!

Yes, it's such a freedom... you're not free actually, but closed in a half of the world.

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