Open Poetry #48 |
story book shero |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you said you were always more shy in public I guess I was public, once you asked me to be and then you measured the size of my affection as if the infection of it was partly treatable with some soft shoe ballet in blue blush tones I didn't mind coming in out of the closet rain and helping you drip on my new hard wood floors they would have buckled eventually from boredom so what if the inspectors would be making notes and grinning at each others secretive spitting we still danced those glass halls some mornings when the rush hour traffic had slowed down to watch what we did with lust and love sounds getting them all glued together like book edges that we stacked up so neatly like a garden wall where you could climb brazen and dream hem less ________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
*smile* Love this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks babe....wonder woman with her blond on? |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Super Girl - lol... even sheros need other identities every now and then. (or maybe that's the voices, I dunno) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
you certainly have a way with words... I'd forgotten how dang good you are!! Very happy to discover your poetry again |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
ha ha ha~*~*~if memory serves...those closets keep the best skeletons...
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Tracey, thanks lady friend ____________ Ms BBBel1e, thank for looking in little one |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"when the rush hour traffic had slowed down to watch what we did with lust and love sounds getting them all glued together like book edges", reminds me, for some reason of the auto/erotic (symphorophilia) novel "Crash" Excellent poetry, I am never dissapoinetd when I read a Darrk poem. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Iceman...humble mumbled thanks amigo |
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahhh, my morning cuppa.... |
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