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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2013-07-04 09:22 PM


Hope


The fledgling leaps from the nest.
-A mother can only watch-
Wasn't this child,
My blue, little egg?


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2013-07-04 10:51 PM


Wonderful --- I found a Robin fledging (from a blue egg - go figure), as are a Starling's eggs, in my yard today, not quite flight ready so caught and put him in a bush.  Mama was quite upset --- don't think she and daddy were thinking about the egg at the time, but I loved your write, it fit right in with a part of my day.

j.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2013-07-05 04:29 AM


Ouch, Juju, yes, scary . . .

Owl

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2013-07-05 07:57 AM


Yes. Understood.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
4 posted 2013-07-05 09:39 AM


She may hope, if her child leaps from the nest, not falls out.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
5 posted 2013-07-07 09:51 PM


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Oh you're so very good . . .


John


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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2013-07-08 03:59 AM


Love it.
     Ida

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2013-07-08 11:05 AM


Poignantly beautiful.

Margherita

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2013-07-16 10:20 PM


Very nice...James
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