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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

0 posted 2013-07-02 12:31 PM

Spring poem

I look up
through thick wide branches
fillled with tiny fragrant blossoms
that rain down upon me
The drone of workers
Feverishly dance
mating with flowers
Ignite my senses
I stand here, again
to catch the nectar
on my tongue
still sweet as before
I missed spring, when he was gone.

E. M. L.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2013-07-02 02:57 AM

Well, we can look forward to fall. I always do. Spring was nice but seemed rather short this year and I miss it to.
Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-02 07:08 AM

It seems to me all the seasons rush on by, but some are delicious to the senses because of who we have in our beds and thoughts. Nice probing poem, Ms E.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2013-07-02 12:10 PM

Yes, Ida spring flew by this year!
Watching the butterflies brings back spring's
feeling of renewal.

JP- Lol,"delicious", a delightful word!
Thank you for your thoughts,

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2013-07-02 01:10 PM

well said !

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2013-07-02 01:49 PM

Dreampoet, thank you

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

6 posted 2013-07-02 01:58 PM

Delightful visions and feelings here, dear Ebonygirl.

Margherita

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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7 posted 2013-07-02 04:37 PM

thank you, Margherita Linda!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2013-07-03 12:57 PM

Very nice...James

ebonygirl
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9 posted 2013-07-03 10:24 AM

Nice of you, James

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2013-07-04 08:36 AM

This is a wonderful capture of spring through the senses and the heart! I enjoyed it very much.

Lori

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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11 posted 2013-07-04 09:15 AM

Thank you, Lori

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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California

12 posted 2013-07-04 01:02 PM

I love the way you ended this. It reminds me of how much more we tend to appreciate every little thing around us when with the right other. Gonna be 106 degrees today here, I am missingspring too, if for different reasons. Enjoyable read, Ms. E.

Michael

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

13 posted 2013-07-04 02:31 PM

Sweet Michael, thank you,

It's hot here too, So. Calif.

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

14 posted 2013-07-14 03:44 PM

somthings should never be missed, as Spring. but you lamented him well

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

15 posted 2013-07-14 07:02 PM

EmmaRose, thank you kindly!
Ms. E

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