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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-07-01 02:46 PM


   Weightless Love

Beneath a floating
moon in a sea
of silver clouds
and tremulous stars,
the gentle voice of a
  twilight wind,
along the deep-forest
edge of the wilderness,
echoes my whispered
  prayer,
from this waking dream
of joyous surrender
to a weightless love,
that our spirits
may dance together
   forever
along the pathways
of eternity.

              --- b. e. adams (7/1/13)


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Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
1 posted 2013-07-01 04:30 PM


Beautiful
And a little bit sad...
because of that word "weightless" )

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2013-07-02 03:43 PM


Another lovely write.  I never thought of love as being "weightless" but, yes, indeed it is.  Strange really when one thinks how bountiful it is.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2013-07-03 11:40 AM


Beautiful, Bruce, indeed true love is pure lightness.

Margherita

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