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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia 
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Live and learn, wait and see That’s she often hears Get in touch - you and she Find it’s not so clear! If you tried, you would get She’s the kind of girl That sometimes makes you dead Wounding your soul Yes, she waits, sees and learns Yeah, she knows enough Many things she concerns But you feel she’s tough What she says is the truth She can’t see the pain That she brings passing through As a hurricane In her soul she believes Better not to hide So she more likes to live With an open mind Never thinks of the cause Making dogs asleep Why the thorns on your rose If she knew, she’d weep But the blindness of youth Keeps her view naïve Still she knows nor the Truth Nor the way to live 18/06/2013 [This message has been edited by Gale (06-24-2013 09:32 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It all comes down to living long enough for truth and understanding AND intelligence which will form inside of her a trinity from which she can draw on. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Jerry, you're right ) But it's hard to correct something, that you can't see and feel. I think that often tactlessness can be congenital. Because any ability has its reverse, and our weak points are the back side of our strong points. And I guess, it's not only time that she needs to understand some truths. [This message has been edited by Gale (06-24-2013 11:51 AM).] |
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