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Open Poetry #48

When You're Gone

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-06-22 07:44 AM

each time we are apart
for a few days or more
its like school vacation
Oh I miss you so much
like a slow heart attack
ah, when you reappear
makes it sweeter by far

©May 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-06-22 11:36 AM

So nice!
Jerry, didn't you like school vacation?
Or you just mean that it’s too long?

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-06-22 11:58 AM

It has to do with someone involved with school, Gale. Thank you for your continued support.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-06-22 11:07 PM

short, sweet and meaningful

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-06-23 07:06 AM

Thanks Emma,sometimes short and sweet is all it takes.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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