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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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0 posted 2013-06-22 07:44 AM



each time we are apart
for a few days or more
its like school vacation
Oh I miss you so much
like a slow heart attack
ah, when you reappear
makes it sweeter by far

©May 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
1 posted 2013-06-22 11:36 AM


So nice!
Jerry, didn't you like school vacation?
Or you just mean that it’s too long?

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-06-22 11:58 AM


It has to do with someone involved with school, Gale. Thank you for your continued support.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
3 posted 2013-06-22 11:07 PM


short, sweet and meaningful
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2013-06-23 07:06 AM


Thanks Emma,sometimes short and sweet is all it takes.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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