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The Fields |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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I remember that love grew In the places where we planted good seeds The places were light and goodness reigned And warmth and kindness had their way We believed love grew Unhindered by selfish hands And waited patiently to be reaped From the fields where we labored Side by side And if we endured we would see it All around us And eat of it our fill Everyday "I'll tell you how the sun rose A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by MorningStar (06-17-2013 07:38 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I liked this very much! Lori  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautifully and gently happy and sad, Aenea. I remember believing that too . . . Good to see you back again. Owl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful poem |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well said ! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well said ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this lovely poem. Ida |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Morning Star - There is a gentleness of love here that wraps around the reader like a blanket. Loved the craft of your words. I enjoyed this a lot. Namyh |
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