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Open Poetry #48

Racing a Jaguar

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-06-10 07:10 PM

Racing A Jaguar

When she pulled up in
her red corvette I was impressed
but for now I was interested
in what was inside the car
who at this particular moment
was getting out of the car,
as she swung those delicious
long legs out her short pleated skirt
rode up high on her thighs
to my complete satisfaction
and she knew I was looking
and seemed to make every effort
to show off her creamy assets,
thats when I ask her,
"Did you ever race a jaguar?"
She gave me a sly look and replied,
"What do you want to race for?"
I gave her my look
and she said,
"That what
I thought."

JamesLee
07June
2013

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-06-10 07:16 PM

Didn't exactly get the last few lines, but enjoyed the scenery anyway . . .

~*~ What does a clock do when it's hungry? It goes back four seconds. ~*~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-06-11 01:55 AM

Hello James, there is some fascination in the vivid scene and the relation with this woman, absolutely delightful

yann

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2013-06-13 10:34 AM

effective 'slice of life' and the 'dance' of love write!

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