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Open Poetry #48

the open fields heart

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-06-08 04:57 PM

She took her shirt off, slowly
like augusts last meal
before fall was to arrive

She had small dimples
the size of a small piece of yarn
that lay in the woods
in the back shed near the river

Her arms always dangled by her side
slight, narrow like the bridge
that crossed into town

With her hair, red, auburn
with the flakes of the suns stare
onto the dews of grass
that lye on the horizon of the train tracks
that stood desolate,
even with the winds breeze

Saints found their home down here
where tree barks had history
and the same town bell
rang every day at 6 pm

Around the open fields
through the midnight haze
that appeared every spring
its heart never lost

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2013-06-10 07:04 PM

Nice...James

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-06-11 01:58 AM

lovely sentiments and scene, unforgettable are women

yann

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

3 posted 2013-06-12 09:29 AM

Oh the memories, lovely

Michael

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-06-12 02:41 PM

Thanks, James...happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2013-06-12 02:41 PM

Yann-

Hope you're well, my friend. Yes, the memories...happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2013-06-12 02:41 PM

Michael-

They stay with you forever. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

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