Open Poetry #48 |
Ghosts |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
like leaves raked and burnt we try to obliterate the past and while the smoke filters back to us as we lean on our virtual rake watching smoke fill the air with his forgotten past but he knows it isn't the same and his past will never be destroyed like the leaves for haunting him like black angels is visions of decades old sins of youth come back seeping beneath the veneer of barricades of dark nights in the bedroom ghost comes uninvited not asking either all we can do is cry mutely as we try to stop the dream but we can't until we sit up in the middle of the dream admitting the voices of 'ere yesterdays and days before ©May 24, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, it's a haunting I'm sure we all experience at some time or other but, as they say, a life not examined isn't worth anything. Just got to do a lot of shoulder shrugging at a certain age. Ghosts aren't there if we don't think they are - Helen's wisdom. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Helen's wisdom is pretty darn good I'm thinking. Appreciate you sharing that wisdom and for stopping in my world. ~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Ah, yes, but... thank goodness you have this distinct magical power to, "poof!" turn apparitions into poems. Always a pleasure! Enjoyed! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You got it, Bob, its like I say, I still have my dark moments, but I write about them instead of acting them out. Thank you for your input today. ~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~ |
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chourouk Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52 |
I aviod tallking and comment so as not to Scratch beauty of your poem. Thank you Chourouk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Um . . . That's one way of looking at it, Chourouk. Thanks. ~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~ |
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chourouk Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52 |
I aviod tallking and comment so as not to Scratch beauty of your poem. Thank you Chourouk |
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chourouk Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52 |
I avoid talking and comment so as not to scratch beauty of your poem . Thank you Chourouk |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
so VERY true ('spot on, etc.)! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning, Bruce, thanks for checking me out. ~*~ When you get a bladder infection, urine trouble. ~*~ |
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