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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-05-28 05:45 AM



like leaves raked and burnt
we try to obliterate the past
and while the smoke filters
back to us as we lean on our
virtual rake watching smoke
fill the air with his forgotten
past but he knows it isn't the
same and his past will never
be destroyed like the leaves
for haunting him like black
angels is visions of decades
old sins of youth come back
seeping beneath the veneer
of barricades of dark nights
in the bedroom ghost comes
uninvited not asking either
all we can do is cry mutely
as we try to stop the dream
but we can't until we sit up
in the middle of the dream
admitting the voices of 'ere
yesterdays and days before

©May 24, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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1 posted 2013-05-28 07:21 AM


Yes, it's a haunting I'm sure we all experience at some time or other but, as they say, a life not examined isn't worth anything.  Just got to do a lot of shoulder shrugging at a certain age.  Ghosts aren't there if we don't think they are - Helen's wisdom.  
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-05-28 09:38 AM


Hah! Helen's wisdom is pretty darn good I'm thinking. Appreciate you sharing that wisdom and for stopping in my world.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2013-05-29 05:09 PM


Ah, yes, but... thank goodness you have this distinct magical power to, "poof!" turn apparitions into poems. Always a pleasure! Enjoyed!  
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-05-29 05:57 PM


You got it, Bob, its like I say, I still have my dark moments, but I write about them instead of acting them out. Thank you for your input today.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

chourouk
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5 posted 2013-05-30 02:56 PM


I aviod tallking and comment so as not to Scratch beauty of your poem.

Thank you

Chourouk

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-05-30 02:58 PM


Um . . . That's one way of looking at it, Chourouk. Thanks.

~*~ The Energizer bunny was arrested and charged with battery. ~*~

chourouk
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7 posted 2013-05-30 02:59 PM


I aviod tallking and comment so as not to Scratch beauty of your poem.

Thank you

Chourouk

chourouk
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8 posted 2013-05-31 01:42 PM


I avoid talking and comment so as not to scratch beauty of your poem .

Thank you

Chourouk

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2013-06-01 10:31 PM


so VERY true ('spot on, etc.)!
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2013-06-02 07:14 AM


Good morning, Bruce, thanks for checking me out.

~*~ When you get a bladder infection, urine trouble. ~*~

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