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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Bringer of Dawn by Rassouli *** Imprisoned in time the portal of peace remains out of reach, too often I flow in the mainstream of oblivion. Blind to the whole vision I walk in darkness even in full sunshine. Unless I am touched by love’s true light I get lost on aimless trails. Within subtle sound waves I expand into timelessness upon the endless echoes of primordial tunes composed by perpetual Creation. I rise into upper levels of deep awareness in a vortex of unbound energy beyond time and space into the endless moment. I expand into timelessness. The portal of peace opens wide I am flooded with a light so bright. Love particles dance through me in celebration of my connection to All There is and ever will be and to You my Beloved my eternal bringer of dawn. *** |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aw . . . This is just damn good. The darkness you find yourself in is only temporary as you wait for your "eternal bringer of dawn." It is the last lone line which gives the poem that something special I have become accustomed to seeing in your poetry, Margherita. It is the soul of the poem. ~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You would never walk in darkness, blind to anything, but hate and fear. We need your voice too much to guide some of us barely holding on.  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
At first I thought this was going to be a reflection on "Time taking its sweet time passing," which is what I suffer from, lol. You have given me a much broader perspective, though, complete with a perfect, timeless destination I would do well to remember exists for us. Thank you for this. Beautifully done. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...a pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jerry, for your kind comment on my attempt to render those special moments when time somehow stands still and we are not affected by our daily challenges, but experience pure peace. Yes, dawn is indeed what I identify as the reconnection with the Light. Dear EmmaRose, thank you so much for your loving comment. Though it is true, that I always remember the light even when I happen to be stuck in the black tunnel, it still happens to me to experience the feeling of "blindness" to the light and it isn't a good feeling. I enjoyed your words. Dear Michael, thank you so much for taking the time to read and to comment so kindly. We know don't we, and yet sometimes we tumble in the dark nonetheless. Our fragility is healed by love and I definitely believe that there is someone who never stops loving us. Thank you, dear James, for telling me you enjoyed this write. Love and joy and ... timelessness! Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
See, that's why I though ... Southern Calif! That's the attitude they have ... only, unlike you (and so lucky you)they are totally oblivious to everything! - Except my son, of course, who lives in SoCal! Beautiful write from the soul, my friend. j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jimmy, for your loving comment. Yes, we really need to grow in awareness. Living "on the surface" is not our goal I think. I bet your son is a beacon to his surroundings, coming from you. Margherita |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Yes, and also, though it is, as it is with you, so easy to get caught up in the physical realm with all of its problems, stresses, and such, but, yet, still, poetry (reading and writing it) takes me away to that place of which you write where time does not seem to exist. It's like I'll be on this site for what seems to be a minimal amount of time, and, then, I'll look up at the clock, and.... What? Where in the world did the time go? Enjoyed! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
No one understands and shares the essence of the source the way you do, Margherita. I suspect you are a very old soul. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bob, yes exactly! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Dear Ida, thank you dear, it takes one to know one . I have heard that Pisces are the oldest souls (but with the enormous amount of experiences they risk to be overwhelmed ... they say). Well sometimes ... indeed.Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY fine indeed !! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One more ride to the top...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear James. Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In searching for a particular poem, I found this one and I see I did not thank you, dear Bruce, for your loving comment. It slipped me by. It's never too late, I guess, so THANK YOU. Though of course you may not see this, I think a little vibration of gratitude will manifest within you nonetheless. Margherita |
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