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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-05-24 06:59 AM

Written about the one I love . . .

you are my love
my lover
beyond the definition of love
beyond the fuzzy, happy feelings
it generates
you are my heartbeat
times a hundred beats per love's seconds
you are mine to have and to hold
and to love
you are the divine fire
and my every heartbeat carries your name
I love you
beyond logic and insanity
beyond reality and imagination
even beyond the weight of these written words
beyond the limit of all limits

©May 23, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-05-24 09:02 AM

This is a mighty fine love poem....wow you wear your heart on your sleeve in the very best way.

Beautiful poem, jp.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-05-24 09:11 AM

Thank you very much, Lori. Yes, I wear my love on my sleeve, and it shall remain there. Appreciate you kind words.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

beaniebaby
Member

since 2005-11-17

Posts 55

3 posted 2013-05-24 10:11 AM

ah to know there are men who love a woman this poetically and beautifully....
lol, you can tell my age by my comment...if I were younger I probably would have replaced 'woman' with 'person'...sigh

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-05-24 10:15 AM

Many thanks, beaniebaby. I hear you on the age thing, and I agree. Mine is a love I have wished for all my life even when I didn't know I was wishing for it. I really appreciate you being here.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-05-24 10:30 AM

When you listen to your heart and let it glide upon your pen, you are quite the romantic wordweaver, dear Jerry. A highly enjoyable, beautiful write.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-05-24 10:36 AM

Listening to my heart takes me into a world all its on, Margherita, and I respond in kind when I have pen in hand. Thank you for you honest thoughts, they inspire me.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2013-05-25 11:43 AM

Ahhh, some Beautiful, Beautiful heart to heart Love expressions from yours to hers. A real pleasurable and inspirational read. Enjoyed!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-05-25 11:52 AM

I thank you and appreciate your comments on my poem, Bob. We poets eat that stuff up, huh? Thanks again.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2013-06-04 11:51 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-06-05 06:58 AM

Appreciate your input, James.

~*~ When you get a bladder infection, urine trouble. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

11 posted 2013-06-06 08:57 AM

a true example of how a poem of love for someone is a greater gift than what comes in a box.
but I do love diamonds nevertheless

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2013-06-06 09:03 AM

Heh.Heh Tell the truth about those diamonds, EmmaRose, tell the truth. I thank you for you kind comments.

~*~ When you get a bladder infection, urine trouble. ~*~

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