The Tiniest Thought or Dream

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Open Poetry #48

The Tiniest Thought or Dream

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-05-23 03:15 PM

The Tiniest Thought or Dream

A moon-lantern hangs
over these ‘endless’ hills
piercing wind-swept clouds
as the trees still dance to
music of the passing storm
in the vanishing wake of
  thunder-cadence
that shook the very waters
  and stones.
Open your eyes and heart
  to taste every moment of
  the precious ‘now’
when even the tiniest thought
  or dream
may stir the boundless sea.

                     --- b. e. adams (5/23/2013)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-05-23 03:28 PM

Loved this . . .

quote:
when even the tiniest thought
or dream
may stir the boundless sea

The words leading up to the above were, as normal for you, gave the reader something to feel good about, the "moon-lantern" occasioned one for me.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2013-05-23 10:17 PM

Jerry is right, Bruce. That last part is genius.
Ida

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2013-05-24 07:38 PM

Again, what a surreal portrait you paint here. It's like for a moment we're able to see as perhaps the gods see. All-encompassing. Enjoyed!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2013-05-25 01:43 PM

Powerful writing from powerful elements, shot through with the gold truth of living for 'now', thank you for the write so fresh...

Goldenrose.

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