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Open Poetry #48

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-02-21 06:22 PM

Observations about some people I know . . .

Some people's minds are tattered
It greases old notions
Removes its thoughts
Shears its beliefs
Reduces its real

Not understanding its a nothing

©February 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-22-2012 09:54 AM).]

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-02-22 12:12 PM

Some interesting and keen observations, JP.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-02-22 05:42 AM

Appreciate your thoughts, Ms e.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-02-22 09:20 AM

Some deep thinking going on here Jerry...
(act like you don't know me lol)

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-02-22 09:45 AM

Haha! Funny this a.m., Lori. Thanks for being here, my friend.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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