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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2013-05-16 06:51 PM


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Pale blue— I  could live
In this blue sky—
Forever yes


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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2013-05-17 01:44 AM


Wondefully said! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2013-05-17 06:06 PM


Having gray compact most of the time recently, it is a pleasure to read your words, through which for a moment the scenery transforms.

M

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
3 posted 2013-05-17 10:52 PM


YES!!

j.

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2013-05-20 08:57 PM


Most ethereal.  Enjoyed!
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
5 posted 2013-05-24 02:42 AM


Liking this, John.
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