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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-05-16 02:02 PM


           Iridescent Love

Here in this deep-forest heart
when the resplendent pastel voice
  of Spring
first bows to the green and
golden song of Summer,
in one infinitely cherished  
moment of the ‘now’ stolen
  from time,
all of life seems to hold its breath
and it is the very rocks that breathe,
as  these dazzling  waters
reflect an infinite azure
cloud-drenched sky and
our finest memories
and dreams of iridescent
   love.

                --- b. e. adams 5/16/13

© Copyright 2013 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2013-05-16 02:10 PM


Dear Bruce, even before reading the whole poem I would have given you "10 - excellence" for the title alone. Iridescent Love Awesome!

And yes you rendered it most beautifully, as always!

Margherita

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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2 posted 2013-05-17 01:40 AM


Bruce, this was just loveley, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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3 posted 2013-05-20 06:07 PM


Always a pleasure to read about "rocks that breathe" or "cry out in praise" would be my interpretation.  Beautiful! Enjoyed!  
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