Open Poetry #48 |
House of Cards |
david3 Junior Member
since 2013-03-02
Posts 15ohio |
House Of Cards When every day brings yet one more barrage Of childish taunts and ploys to bring you pain, Stand firm and focus past his weak mirage, For power given him is yours to gain. A house of cards he builds to test your will, Subjecting you to grief and deep despair.. The former peace you knew can be yours still, For his house is the one in disrepair. You've always had the strength to wage this war, Release it now with confidence of cause. Your dues were paid for what has gone before, Reclaim your life without a moment's pause. Now strip him of his weapons made of clay, And watch his blackened heart himself betray. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Well done sonnet, David. A little ego building done with the aim of victory over what sounds like a cad of the highest sort. I liked this. Very much. ~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like you are slying Goliath, David. Ida |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I very much enjoyed the way this inspires and encourages someone to move on beyond the dark behaviour of another. Wonderful flow and rhythm throughout David! Really well done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I'm thinking that Maggie Banning the daughter of Peter Pan might say here to your "dark character" what she told Captain Hook in the movie... "You need a mother very, very badly!" Good job on your Sonnet! Those are tough to write. Enjoyed! |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
a poem with a message we can relate to and value |
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