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paderewski
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0 posted 2013-11-12 05:35 PM



in the afternoon
I reminisce about secret things
I bask in the glory
recalling old skeletons
and the scandal which was flung
silver virgin-like clouds
envelop my thoughts and I smile
as I await the sound of her laughter

for Nanette

     . . . for rhymesters

     . . . for free verse

     . . . for love

(c)November 9, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2013-11-12 05:45 PM


silver virgin-like clouds
envelop my thoughts and I smile


Lovely imagery and thoughts, dear Jerry.

Margherita

paderewski
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2 posted 2013-11-12 05:56 PM


Thank you so much, Margherita that you read and comment on my poetry.

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2013-11-12 08:35 PM


O those clouds, they bring those images that haunt us when we least expect
paderewski
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4 posted 2013-11-12 09:01 PM


Hello Emma, I appreciate you stopping by. It is always good to see you. Thank you.

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

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