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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2013-05-09 07:24 AM



and you hear my footsteps on the meadow dew
the fingers in wet sounds of hurry feet walking
knowing your windows are open for the evening

you recline your pretending of innocent curves
but wear just enough to make them advertisements
knowing my eyes will be shopping your sigh shelves

picking up and tasting the fruits of your garden,
the nectar of your whiskey well that is glistening
and the panting pockets you have stitched open

with the prices marked down, so it feels like stealing


_____________
daark

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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2013-05-09 11:23 AM


It's a good morning to start my day off with your poetry.  Liking this lots.

A

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2013-05-09 11:46 AM


Ms Ali-san, thank you lady


Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2013-05-09 03:25 PM


Sultry nice.  
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2013-05-09 03:30 PM


LHB, thank you amigo


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2013-05-09 05:34 PM


No sir...you are the special today!

You got the goods dude.  Xo

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2013-05-11 06:27 AM


quote:
knowing my eyes will be shopping your sigh shelves


Magician of words, you take us into the scene ... following you on that secret meadow where your seeds of emotions grow into sparkling moments.

Margherita

Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2013-05-29 12:09 PM


reading between the lines here again....the price does always go down don't it?

~~~kingsangel~~~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2013-06-05 09:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
Alison
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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
9 posted 2013-06-06 11:05 AM


Still loving this.
EmmaRose
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10 posted 2013-06-07 08:39 AM


enjoying the banquet of your thoughts
whisky wells especially in the overflow

Angel4aKing
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11 posted 2013-06-29 04:54 AM


had to read this one again ... golden ....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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