Sophia's Arc - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #48

Sophia's Arc

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-05-07 07:39 PM

Her face was cold
even though the lines across her wrist
told the story of a woman
that passed through the desert
with her long legs pressed against
the back strokes of the western wind.

Sophia was the suns arc
under the crescent sky
she felt her knees rise
then buckle once
she spotted his watchful eye.

Through the years
winter, fall,
she felt his aura
his eyes tear her dress
her tears onto her white, faint blouse

Until sunrise
before midnight
before she could utter his name
he touched her
like the ravens gentle stare.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2013-05-07 09:59 PM

Morbidly bleak with illuminating visuals. Enjoyed!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-05-08 01:20 AM

graceful images for a poignant story, enjoyed,

yann

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2013-05-08 05:29 PM

intresting and intriguing

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-05-08 10:37 PM

Very nice...James

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.