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The Trail to the Deep
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The Trail to the Deep |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
The trail to the Deep Is covered with stones The descent is steep With dark overtones My heart of red clay A cave that you paint A hunter at play Was never a saint A sign of the Flood And you leave your mark You sign with my blood And behind leave dark CG (P.S. something a little different from the usual 'mushy' sonnets...LOL) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dark and mysterious works for me every time. quote: My theme song . . . ~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Nice! My favorite stanza was the first. It flowed well and was easy for me to imagine. Enjoyed!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like it, I like it. Your versitality is showing!  good on ya, CG~ |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Jerry - a common theme...lol - thank you. LB - glad you liked - thank you for stopping by. BluesSerenade- thank you, working on more... CG |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed the dark tones in this CastleGuard, coupled with the rhyme scheme and flow. Very nicely done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
love the images for me they conjured up something ancient and timeless touching lori |
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