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OwlSA
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0 posted 2013-05-04 03:44 AM



LET-HER WHISPERS
4 May 2013

“I wrote a lot
that day”
she mused
and a slow-remember
wisp-of-smile
painted
pictures
not
forgotten.

Owl

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2013-05-04 08:39 PM


Wonderful...James
OwlSA
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2 posted 2013-05-04 09:12 PM


Thank you, James.  Smiles.

Owl

2islander2
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3 posted 2013-05-06 02:17 PM


this is quite delicious, loved it,


yann

KentAshbyKorb
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4 posted 2013-05-06 03:12 PM


Lovely sentiment!
OwlSA
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5 posted 2013-05-06 04:51 PM


Thanks, Yann.  Glad you liked it.  Smiles.

Thanks, Kent, for your kind words.

Owl

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6 posted 2013-05-07 09:45 AM


I spent much of the weekend sorting through things I'd stuffed into a closet. Some had been there, untouched, for several years - reminders of what once was - or at least was in my heart and imagination. I thought I'd tackled the weekend project with a stern resolve to trash the past - but some of those "I wrote a lot that day" words were packed away again - with a wisp-of-smile. *S*

Across the miles smiles to you, dear lady... some things are never forgotten.

OwlSA
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7 posted 2013-05-07 05:55 PM


Thank you, for your beautiful reply, Ruth.  

Email to follow.  Rambo needs more prayers.  Owners have deserted him.

Owl

Lighthousebob
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8 posted 2013-05-08 12:09 PM


Sometimes the simplest reflections carry smiles.  You had to know that I'd especially enjoy this one!  
OwlSA
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9 posted 2013-05-08 01:16 AM


Thank you, Bob.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Owl

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2013-05-08 04:08 PM


One of those short but delightful poems that everybody loves.
                            Ida

OwlSA
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11 posted 2013-05-08 04:47 PM


Thank you, Ida.  Smiles.

Owl

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