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OwlSA
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0 posted 2013-05-02 03:02 AM


MY POINT OF DEW
30 April 2013

Too many books spoil the truth
and don't keep the wolf from the floor
and the forget-me-dots
brush rainbow hues
where danger
fears to threaten.

Owl

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2013-05-02 02:43 PM


an especially fine title !


... too many books ... so little time ...

OwlSA
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2 posted 2013-05-02 03:31 PM


Thank you, Bruce.

Owl

sanctus
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3 posted 2013-05-02 04:39 PM


Beautiful piece, I liked the flow of the poem
OwlSA
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4 posted 2013-05-02 05:15 PM


Thank you, Sanctus.

Owl

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2013-05-03 02:20 PM


I s'pose if ya get knots from the dots that should be nots, don't be openin' the door lil piggy!

Anyways, I enjoyed reading this your intriguing "point of dew."  

OwlSA
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6 posted 2013-05-03 02:32 PM


Giggles, Bob.  Thanks for "getting it."  My point of dew is that I have never tasted soup I didn't enjoy.

Owl

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