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LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
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0 posted 2013-04-20 07:02 PM



"In the dark we are who we long to be"
V

Do not hang your wish upon my star
for when it falls from the sky,
and your favor,
no one will really believe
it once came true.

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2013-04-24 12:55 PM


No lulling here into any false sense of security.  Enjoyed!  
EmmaRose
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2 posted 2013-04-24 03:15 PM


A most sobering and honest write
I liked

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2013-05-03 11:21 PM


Love the edginess and how you dangle that star.
SimplyGold
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4 posted 2015-03-30 02:05 PM


Happened to come upon this and loved it.
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