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Coming Bliss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coming Bliss In a bamboo forest I listened to the leaves caressing the wind, I heard the creaking felt the tweaking from the motion of the stalks I tripped... I fell under the spell of the serenity of the forest I closed my eyes taking in the aroma that was all around me swallowed the saliva that wet my tongue wiped away the sweat that was resting upon my brow I closed my eyes tighter and with the coming bliss I was hesitant to re-open them for within the presence of my bliss I felt someone approaching the desire of my lips I heard a womans voice softly saying "all is well" I fell under her spell I felt her touch opening my eyes I was terribly alone reclosing my eyes I yearned for her return. JamesLee 17April 2013 |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Quick! Close those eyes and dream of bliss! Nice one! enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Kat's got the answer, James . . . ~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I enjoyed your fantasy of the woman in the bamboo forest bringing bliss very much.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you kat, Jerry and Bob for the nice responses...James |
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